god works in mysterious ways

Posted by mansoor on 17 Feb 2007 | Tagged as: 55fiction

I

‘how could she do this to me? How could she cheat on me?? I gave her everything she wanted!’ he thought as he stepped off the curb..

The last thing he saw before the darkness engulfed were the tail lights of the car careening away

II

‘thankgod for the weekend..’ he thought pressing the pedal to get home faster. His wife was waiting with dinner.. And he wasn’t going to miss it this time.

when he saw him, it was too late! Get back Get Back!! He tried to yell.. Then the pain shot up his left arm.

III

‘what are we going to do?’ she sobbed on the phone. ‘he knows about us..’ he tried consoling her.. Knowing it wouldn’t do any good. ‘He’s going to kill us! Oh God save me!!!’ she prayed silently as there was a beep in the line. ‘he’s calling, wait’..

A female voice asked.. ‘is this mrs rehman?’

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another in the new 55fiction series.. still trying to get my head around it… still thanking xill for inspiration.

6 Responses to “god works in mysterious ways”

  1. on 17 Feb 2007 at 5:04 am   Faisal

    You mean “God” works in mysterious ways?
    Take it light, this is just a linguistic correction. The word “God” is with a capital “G” when used by the so-called people of the book. For pagan religions, the word is used with a small “g”. So we have God for Christians, Muslims and Jews but gods for lets say, romans.
    Take care,
    Faisal

  2. on 17 Feb 2007 at 2:13 pm   xill-e-ilahi

    oye hoye! seems im contagious :)

  3. on 17 Feb 2007 at 2:15 pm   xill-e-ilahi

    kya baat hai! i’m contagious. :)

  4. on 17 Feb 2007 at 7:57 pm   sid

    gr8 one!!

    the creative juices are flowing.. :)

  5. on 17 Feb 2007 at 9:29 pm   *UD*

    u’r getting good at it :)

  6. on 18 Feb 2007 at 1:06 am   xill-e-ilahi

    damn i posted more or less the same comment twice.

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