the phantom message

Posted by mansoor on 06 Apr 2007 | Tagged as: 55fiction

“You’ve got mail” beeped the PC

*click*

Subject: Happy Birthday from Noman!!

tears started welling up in her eyes… he remembered!

then she started sobbing… remembering the day God took him away from her…

10 Responses to “the phantom message”

  1. on 06 Apr 2007 at 4:18 pm   UD

    jo zindah hotey unko q bday yaad nai rehti :@

  2. on 06 Apr 2007 at 6:24 pm   Nephelium

    What a cruel fiction it was my dear!

  3. on 06 Apr 2007 at 11:03 pm   SK

    This is soooooo beautiful. Write it yourself? So where are guys like this? How come we don’t see them around? :( I want a guy like that…that considerate and loving…then I promise I will cry for him when he passes away.. ;) ..ahhahah….no, no just kidding. sorry…mean I know. But the first part of this is true. :(

  4. on 07 Apr 2007 at 1:06 pm   mansoor

    ud: i have no idea… per maybe u should remind them first :p

    nephelium: it was…. but truth is a lot stranger *all mysterious*

    sk: thankyou, yes i did write it myself. such guys are everywhere.. we are the fathers, the sons and the husbands who live in shadows and only surface when the absolute need arises. We are the ones who make sure you are taken care of.. and we are the ones who succumb to the forces of the world to ensure the smile on your face remains as intact as the first time we laid eyes on you. :)

  5. on 08 Apr 2007 at 3:49 am   Joyce

    well said…

  6. on 09 Apr 2007 at 11:43 pm   SK

    Yeah, very well said…but then personal experience….also read as ‘my ex’…”We are the ones who make sure WE ARE taken care of.. and we are the ones who succumb to the forces of the world to ensure the smile on OUR OWN face remains as intact as the first time we laid eyes on you….that was/is him. I know guys are supposed to do all you are talking about…but my point exactly…WHERE ARE THESE GUYS who DO what they’re supposed to? :) ‘Such guys are everywhere’….but nowehere to be found. :)

  7. on 10 Apr 2007 at 4:14 pm   mansoor

    joyce: thankyou

    sk: we seem to be saying the same thing about good girls/women.. i wonder if the problem is more of identifiying these kind of people than looking for them? maybe we look too hard and yet are attracted to the wrong kind? lately however, in terms of rishtas, i’m coming across a surprising number of idiots my friends are being asked to marry! i wonder where they were hiding all their lives. Suddenly, i’m all in favour of choosing your life partner in college/university!

  8. on 11 Apr 2007 at 9:09 pm   SK

    Whatever works! :)

  9. on 12 Apr 2007 at 1:20 am   mansoor

    sk: lolz u dont sound much convinced by that either. luck it is after all huh? :)

  10. on 13 Apr 2007 at 12:57 am   SK

    hmmm…could be….or it could simply be that people’s values nowadays as regards relationships and marriage, and what these are supposed to be all about, have simply gone to the dogs!! :)

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