arz kya hai…
Posted by mansoor on 13 Jun 2008 | Tagged as: general riff raff
on popular demand, i present to you… a 70’s style shair!
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okay, fine… so poetry really isn’t my forte. sue me 
however, the start is exactly what i love about blogging and having that select group of people to interact with on here. its different, its exciting and its quite mind boggling at times. the creativity that blogging offers a person, whether you write about your personal life, your work, or even something you’re passionate about is something which just cannot be replaced.
creativity, i believe, is seriously what makes the world go round. its what makes life worth living, its what makes waking up each day and not knowing what lies ahead so much fun! creativity is essentially what life is. its change, its ruffling up the feathers, its a kaleidoscope…
and if nothing else, it provides for many of the interesting experiences that truly shape up what kind of a person you are. so go ahead, be creative! and whatever you do… dont ever let anyone judge you!
to put my money where my mouth is… here’s my stab at (creative) poetry… ala 70s style~
chahtay hain tumko, kyonkay chahna hee aata hai humko
per jaanay kyon, na chahtay bhee khona perta hai tumko
chahat hai mere, kay tum mein sama jaaon poorey tarah
phir kyon ye chahat mere le gaye tum say door itna?
wah wahh..janaab kya baat hai. i actually understood that shair unlike xill who says the most complicated stuff and doesn’t even explain back to me.
i loved ur outake on creativity. u shud be a counsellor to young children/ teenagers in need of hope and positivity. go you!
this is the 2nd realli ’socially’ bursting post from u. simply a delight to read. btw im curious as to what u recited at the reading?
chahat mein kya duniya daari…ishq mein kaisi majboori…loagon ka kya samjhanay do…un kee apni majboori…
SubhanAllah….kya zabardast ashaar kahain hain aap ne Mansoor bhai :)..Very nice!!
knowing u, i want ur poetry waheen jahan xill ki hei, right at the top
, n maybe the type that flies by mocha with a high picthed whoooooooooooooosh hehehe 
iced: thanks yaar, i try to spread cheer and joy :p (only when im cheerful though :p) i wish i could share, but it has to be kept… private.. sowwie
utp: well said!
fariha: welcome baq! i thought you had abandoned me :p
UD: lolzzz! my poetry might never even get off the ground yaar… mostly cuz i’ve never understood it i guess.. prose is, and always has been, my game
@Mansoor
Ai te ho hi nahi sakta jee..I follow ur blog pretty regularly…’am just a little lazy when it comes to commenting
Awwwwwww …. *shakes head in amazement*
welcome to shayirhood =))
And like pakkay shayirs, itni lambi tamheed baandhi hay 2 sher sunanay say pahlay tum nay